Okay this is the poem I finally finished for my English class. It isn't perfect, so any help would be very appreciated! Enjoy! Haha:
She was a rebellious girl, said all the broken Barbie dolls; a creative girl, too, said her drawings on the walls; a clumsy, wild girl, said the many broken cups; but not a careless girl, said the well fed dogs and cats.
She is a strange girl, say the grumpy, old neighbors; a funny girl, too, say her wonderful friends; an eccentric, crafty girl, says the decorated silverware; but not an unhappy girl, says the very used picnic basket.
She will be a valuable woman, says the solar powered schools; still an rebellious woman, too, says the bright blue house with colorful stars; a educated, scholary woman, says the shelves and shelves of books; but not ungrateful woman, say the loving family and friends.
So that's my poem! It was very rushed so don't make fun of me. Haha
Oh Yes! This is my happy dance for posting just about everyday last month (or at least 31 posts!) =D
2 comments:
Good job Stormy :) One thing: "says the very used picnic basket." I'd change very to 'over'. That just kind of stuck out to me, the rest was perfect!
Lol, umm 31 days IS every single day. Just..yeah. Congratulations though! :D
ahh your poem PWNS all.
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